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Fantasize by ~Chaotic-Canine:iconChaotic-Canine:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


What has wishing on a star done for me?
I’m still here, in this pool of utter anguish
Gasping and thrashing for my bitter dreams
Still pleading for my star-crossed anticipations

I contemplate if drowning would be easier
Letting my emoted nightmares devour me
Forgetting to reach for those stellar expectations
And just descend into the unfathomable monotony

But the fear of never soaring burns in my chest
Those imaginable jewels keep my wings flapping
Hoping for the flight far from this intolerability
So that impossibility becomes wishful philosophy
©2008-2009 ~Chaotic-Canine
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Author's Comments

Reach for the stars, even if you know you'll never touch them!
^_^

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*Stregian May 12, 2008, 8:47:32 AM
I like how it started out angst but ended up with optimism or...resolution toward hope.
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~Chaotic-Canine May 12, 2008, 11:30:31 AM
Thank ya... I'm a pessimistic, so everything that usually happens, is either expected or good! ^..^

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Be careful whose toes you step on today because they might be connected to the foot that kicks your ass tomorrow.

All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day!!
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*Stregian May 12, 2008, 4:29:34 PM
I told someone that being pessimistic is a blast...because anything good is a surprise and a delight. If you expect the worse, anything else is GREAT!
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~lawgik May 13, 2008, 8:58:28 AM
Sounds depressingly hopeful :thumbsup:

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"Keep the art going, because we all need a push."

Quoted from me (is that not cool anymore?)
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~Chaotic-Canine May 13, 2008, 3:02:31 PM
So true! :nod:

--
Be careful whose toes you step on today because they might be connected to the foot that kicks your ass tomorrow.

All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day!!
:iconchaotic-canine:
~Chaotic-Canine May 13, 2008, 3:02:53 PM
Thanks! :w00t:

--
Be careful whose toes you step on today because they might be connected to the foot that kicks your ass tomorrow.

All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day!!
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Mood: Optimism ~TempusFugit99 Feb 27, 2009, 6:27:48 AM
I like it a lot

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Time flys so either find a way or make one!!!
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~Chaotic-Canine Feb 27, 2009, 7:26:39 AM
Why thank you! ^_^

--
Be careful whose toes you step on today because they might be connected to the foot that kicks your ass tomorrow.

All it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. That's how far the world is from where I am. Just one bad day!!
:icontempusfugit99:
~TempusFugit99 Feb 27, 2009, 7:28:32 AM
much welcome

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Time flys so either find a way or make one!!!
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